tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post357722333652280370..comments2024-02-21T05:25:03.233-05:00Comments on Adventures in YA Publishing: 1st 5 pages workshop - October entry #1 revision #4Martina Boonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03358736828122139189noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-71422005908334376942011-11-05T16:36:50.087-04:002011-11-05T16:36:50.087-04:00Thank you, Beth.Thank you, Beth.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-20864786987781260932011-11-05T13:04:12.559-04:002011-11-05T13:04:12.559-04:00I'm a little late, but great writing, Linda. I...I'm a little late, but great writing, Linda. It's real.Beth MacKinneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14510201092365855223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-67479540487458692482011-11-02T09:53:34.633-04:002011-11-02T09:53:34.633-04:00Thanks, Jenny. I've enjoyed being a part of th...Thanks, Jenny. I've enjoyed being a part of this workshop with you. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-23951737767834430172011-11-02T00:44:55.689-04:002011-11-02T00:44:55.689-04:00I love this so much. Great work. I really can'...I love this so much. Great work. I really can't wait to see this on book shelves everywhere!Jenny Kaczorowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00289053983485597342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-14579931234485962942011-11-01T17:18:00.725-04:002011-11-01T17:18:00.725-04:00Thanks, Lisa. It is because of this wonderful blog...Thanks, Lisa. It is because of this wonderful blog and the constructive critiques that the voice is strong. Too bad I can't keep posting five new pages every week and have the whole manuscript critiqued!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-13179216367523171682011-11-01T14:46:43.863-04:002011-11-01T14:46:43.863-04:00All I can say is AWESOME JOB! Your voice is just s...All I can say is AWESOME JOB! Your voice is just so strong. Again - can't wait to read this when it's published!Lisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-30210162476584483492011-11-01T10:07:02.773-04:002011-11-01T10:07:02.773-04:00Thanks, Halli.Thanks, Halli.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-15660431961160873832011-11-01T08:31:56.558-04:002011-11-01T08:31:56.558-04:00I like this story. I definitely have strong feelin...I like this story. I definitely have strong feelings about all three characters and I'm hoping that Ken Kim puts A.J. in her place! The section with them trading insults is well written.<br />Great revisions over the past month.Halli Gomezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09667712458691917486noreply@blogger.com