0 March 1st Five Pages Workshop Entries Are Up For Comment

Dig in everyone. The five entries for this month are posted below this post. Please help us help these writers by giving them feedback on what works, what doesn't work, what grabs you, and what doesn't. Do you like the voice? Do you "get" the story? Are you hooked? Does it sound too much like what else is out there? What can they do to make things better and hook readers faster.

Looking forward to hearing your comments!

Happy reading!

Martina