tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post3544121682703326946..comments2024-02-21T05:25:03.233-05:00Comments on Adventures in YA Publishing: May Pitch+250 Finalist - Accordian GirlMartina Boonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03358736828122139189noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-20365457101778764192013-05-23T22:15:35.951-04:002013-05-23T22:15:35.951-04:00This is so well done. I love it. I have never re...This is so well done. I love it. I have never read a novel in verse, and your 250 makes me want to seek out more novels written this way. <br /><br />One comment on the pitch. From the way it was written, I thought the brother was abducted. I think the word "little" before brother threw me.Amy Truebloodhttp://www.chasingthecrazies.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-65461455411644716522013-05-23T19:39:56.442-04:002013-05-23T19:39:56.442-04:00Courage in poetry paid off for sure. Very unique w...Courage in poetry paid off for sure. Very unique way to present a subject I'm sure lots of people want more books about right now. Way to write outside the lines, in more ways than one!Corrie Halugahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12361676327531522186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-64647933706202919552013-05-22T14:05:09.557-04:002013-05-22T14:05:09.557-04:00In my opinion, this is the clear winner. I love po...In my opinion, this is the clear winner. I love poetry and prose and story. There are some really neat things in the wording here, subtle and yet striking. Incredibly powerful. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-52771916734282590682013-05-22T11:38:00.413-04:002013-05-22T11:38:00.413-04:00I've never read a novel in verse before, but t...I've never read a novel in verse before, but this is gorgeous and compelling. Good luck!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09521465127967341900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-3714027561173561632013-05-21T20:48:18.222-04:002013-05-21T20:48:18.222-04:00I truly wanted to keep reading! (no, like, serious...I truly wanted to keep reading! (no, like, seriously, can you post more?) Bravo!Oliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13362385746536394255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-53462602094564288902013-05-21T15:56:11.454-04:002013-05-21T15:56:11.454-04:00I didn't think I'd enjoy reading in verse,...I didn't think I'd enjoy reading in verse, but it definitely kept me in the story. Great writing! Good luck with this.sheri levyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044105588939751015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-274325087153399742013-05-21T14:17:11.491-04:002013-05-21T14:17:11.491-04:00This was beautiful! I envy your talent to write in...This was beautiful! I envy your talent to write in verse, it's definitely a unique and engaging way to tell a story. Good luck!<br /><br />-Amanda LeighAmandaLeighnoreply@blogger.com