tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post2504285611353482788..comments2024-02-21T05:25:03.233-05:00Comments on Adventures in YA Publishing: Critique Clinic: Line-by-line Contest Round OneMartina Boonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03358736828122139189noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-46349303787330821772010-07-02T07:45:25.458-04:002010-07-02T07:45:25.458-04:00Thanks so much for the critiques! Everyone has bee...Thanks so much for the critiques! Everyone has been so kind and incredibly helpful. It's funny how it can be so obvious that your first sentences are confusing and your first paragraph simply doesn't work...but as the person who wrote it, you just can't see it. Thanks for (hopefully) pointing me in the right direction!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005062827798430682.post-13611416870383275872010-06-30T23:15:14.023-04:002010-06-30T23:15:14.023-04:00Thanks to everyone for time, talent and feedback. ...Thanks to everyone for time, talent and feedback. I really appreciated the opportunity.<br />cheersbfavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164661338051897220noreply@blogger.com