Monday, February 25, 2013

1 Pitch+250 - Harold – The Kid Who Ruined My Life and Saved the Day

Name: Dana Edwards
Title: Harold – The Kid Who Ruined My Life and Saved the Day
Genre: MG, contemporary

Pitch:

Twelve-year-old Jake and Harold have been neighbors since kindergarten and if you ask Jake, that’s seven years too many. Who cares if Harold’s a genius when it comes to baseball trivia and Algebra? Jake is D-O-N-E! Harold’s “special” and he has a knack for ruining Jake’s social life. But when Jake gets an opportunity to play shortstop for the undefeated Comets, he’ll get a chance to ditch Harold and Jake’s second place team—unless he discovers winning isn’t everything.

1st 250:
On the first day of sixth grade, I cracked open the front door and looked outside. The bus stop was empty. So far, so good. I’d figured Harold’s mom would drive him this year like she did when he was in kindergarten. Harold had trouble when it came to new things. Well, that was one of his problems.

I walked toward the stop and from behind I heard, “Hey Jake! Wait up! It’s 8:03. Bus Number 6 will be here at 8:07.”

I walked faster and called over my shoulder, “Thanks for the update, Harold. I didn’t know I was so early. Tomorrow, I’ll sleep in a whole 4 minutes.”

Harold caught up with me and said, “I woke up at 6:33, but Mom said I couldn’t come out until I saw you.”

Great. Where is that bus?

“Hey, Jake, have you ever heard of Harvey Haddix?” he asked while he rummaged through his book bag.

I knew what he was looking for. Each year before school started, Harold added one green composition notebook to his school supply list and in that notebook he kept track of the times he beat me at anything—Texas Hold’em, NCAA 12, checkers. He’d write down the date, the game, and the score. He also wrote down baseball stats.

“Yeah, Harold, I know all about Harvey.”

I didn’t have a clue, but I thought just this once Harold wouldn’t go into his never-ending monologue about one more Major League ballplayer I’d never heard of.

1 comment:

  1. Sounds like a great story, especially for boys. Thanks for sharing this.

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