0 1st 5 Pages October Workshop Final Revisions Posted

This month's First Five Pages Workshop mentored by the lovely P.J. Hoover is almost over! The final revisions are posted below. It's been a wonderful experience for us to peek over P.J.'s shoulder as she read the initial entries. We learn so much from our mentors at every workshop, and working alongside P.J. has been an honor and a pleasure! It's also a joy to watch the manuscripts take shape.

Our next workshop will open for entries the first Saturday of November. If you have a manuscript you'd like to consider submitting, please check our Contests page.

Meanwhile, please help us give the writers from this month's workshop the best possible experience by giving them your feedback on their final revisions. Just scroll down below this post to see their entries.

Thanks so much, everyone! Happy Reading!

Martina and Lisa

ABOUT P.J. Hoover

P. J. Hoover first fell in love with Greek mythology in sixth grade thanks to the book Mythology by Edith Hamilton.

After a fifteen year bout as an electrical engineer designing computer chips for a living, P. J. decided to take her own stab at mythology and started writing books for kids and teens. When not writing, P. J. spends time with her husband and two kids and enjoys practicing kung fu, solving Rubik's cubes, and watching Star Trek.

For more information about P. J. (Tricia) Hoover, please visit her website www.pjhoover.com. P. J. is also a member of THE TEXAS SWEETHEARTS AND SCOUNDRELS and THE ENCHANTED INKPOT.