We invite everyone to join in and comment, contructively and kindly, on what you think is working and what isn't. Are you hooked? Are you confused about anything? Do you like the voice? Do you think this starts in the right place? Whatever strikes you.
Lisa Gail Green and I are delighted to welcome a guest moderator this month:
Cheryl Reifsnyder lives and writes with her inspirational family, two energetic dogs, and a small mammal menagerie, all of which are fairly tame. She writes about cool science stuff for children and adults, daydreams about stories and characters 87% of the time, and tries not to plot novels while driving. Visit her at www.cherylreif.com or follow @CherylRWrites on Twitter.